Monday 2 March 2009

Editing our writing

We were reading some of our publisher reports today to try to make them persuasive and informative. Here were some of the things we were looking for:















Here is an example of our work...what do you like? What could be improved?
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous18 March 2009 at 21:12

    I like the little booklet, because it has subheadings, paragraphs and different kind of informations.

    Fleur

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